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eath13
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Join date : 2011-08-09
Location : California U.S.A.

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PostSubject: my application   my application EmptyTue Aug 09, 2011 10:58 am

Age: 13

Location: California

Previous Servers: my dads a few I can’t remember

What is role play/ have you ever done it?: role play is the best thing ever I do a LARP myself role play is the games I played at 7 years old

Do you have skype, steam, xfire etc.? no

Character Profile

Character Name: aramour ramsay

Characters age: 23

Race: Baktria

Background: raised pore and his father was not around because he was always working. He wants to prove he can be a great warrior/miner. and was not very religious as a kid but as bad luck turned worse he turn to fiat. he was made fun of by others as a kid and did not have many friends so he grew up tuff. he had to work as a kid but was smart he enjoyed playing war games

Whats your characters personality? Likes money and building, enjoys company, tuff but likes to have fun, he likes making

Religion: (state your religion as given in the History Section of the Forum) Phillipe Donociannew friends

What do you want your character to achieve? Mine, build, have fun most of all, get a crafting and smelting licence, and get sum land and build a amazing house.

How will your character contribute to the World of Baktrainia? Fight for my faction and build houses walls (stuff for protection)

Why did you choose the race you've chosen? The Baktria sounds the most strait forword


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Posts : 111
Join date : 2011-04-25

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PostSubject: Re: my application   my application EmptyTue Aug 09, 2011 11:52 am

Some parts are good, others aren't

Please try a little harder and look at some other apps as examples (like mine or Nihilus's)

The background needs to be longer.

Human is not a race, go look at the race section on the forums.

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PostSubject: Re: my application   my application EmptyWed Aug 10, 2011 7:49 am

Much better.

Status: Accepted
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